I really enjoyed this. I got some good air and it was fun.
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Friday, April 24, 2020
My New Bike
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Wow Ben,
ReplyDeleteYour new bike is so cool, I love the red writing on the black frame. I go to Bottle Lake Forest too! You will have to slam down those hills when the Adventure Park is back open!
Yes im waiting for the adventure park to open up again
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yes your bike is really awesome remember the think six!! [:
ReplyDeleteAye yo Ben! I know the boy who made the bike jump, it's my oldest brothers best friend Eli. You'll see him up there. Great bike even though I've already seen it when I came to your house.
ReplyDeleteHi Ben my name is Yousuf from Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you added some cool pictures of you doing some cool jumps on top of the mountain. It would be good if you could add more details about your bike. Maybe next time you could say what type of bike it was and what company you got it from. This reminds me when I use to have a bike and I went up the mountain it was really fun but then my bike chain got rusty so I had to put it in the garbage. It would be awesome if you could check my blog http://wpsyousufs.blogspot.com/2018/01/welcome.html#comment-form
ReplyDeleteBlog u later.